Ahh, the title of this piece made me wonder if there would be any kind of magical or mystical element. And I was pleasantly surprised by HOW everything came together (that element aside) - not because you've never drawn me in (you do; your pieces are smart and well-crafted), but because this was such a complete, movie-like piece. I could see every scene unfold. And I love how you used the briefcase: it's important, but it's not, and that is indeed the point. It's only important because it's motivation for the larger narrative.

Very well written!